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Bad Weather

I'm trying to get back to you but the feelings shown could not be fooled We came so close to being together but it all fell out due to certain weather And when rain begins to fall and light veins circulate to dance it's hard for us to stand on a stumbled chance A chance that scraped our knees to give a painful break Yet I hoped by memory, that on a stormy day every time you'd carry an umbrella, it would remind you for me to stay But for some reason, that protective coverage would fail and each drop would make you forget, all the good times that sailed I stayed away for far too long, and left your mind when I was gone by leaving you I left a hiss, of all the love I gave by kiss But all this bad weather has made me miss, all the good times I could of wished you left the good and drank the bad, which made you regret the love we had...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/26/2009 1:06:00 PM
Yep! It's a good'un alright! Well done, Jess!
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Date: 7/25/2009 6:20:00 PM
Love the title, Jess - Very enticing! Good start, you don't need to struggle so much to find rhymes. I find every other line lets it flow, then I can play with the other two. Bottom line - if it feels good, do it!
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