Bad Sleep

With draggy eyes
Ascending slumbers boundry
Vivid weeping dreams...


ps a haiku of sorts,i guess.

sadhaiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 10, 2011 at 7:01 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Gary. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol

Gary Bechter

June 7, 2011 at 9:31 AM

Thank you all for the comments.I am not on soup very much because of lack of time.All of your comments are recieved with appreciation. G.

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 7, 2011 at 8:25 AM

My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, gary

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 5, 2011 at 5:20 PM

Congrats Gary on your featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with us all my friend with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

August 9, 2010 at 8:31 AM

your last line was just captivating, Gary! Speaking of sleep, I need to catch me some shuteye-- but this was a wonderful read :) - thanks for sharing :) --& I suppose this can be listed as senryu? I'm no expert but since this deals with human nature? -- nikko :)