Danesh Morgan Poet I do not know?

Bad Poems

A thousand poems I write,
And not one of them I like,

Could I let you see that,
All my poems are bad.

I lost my gift with words,
And left alone with hurt.

It is too late to take back,
Now ready for your attacks!!!

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Giorgio Veneto
Metrical verse~contest

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Kelly Deschler September 4, 2013 at 1:52 PM I can relate to this! When I write a poem, I never think that it is good enough. It's an agonizing feeling!...But, I just write from my heart and let others be the judge!....Great poem here, Danesh! Danesh Morgan September 4, 2013 at 6:50 PM Miss Kelly its good by its own. thanks for sharing your thoughts

Sue-Ellen Newman August 2, 2013 at 3:29 AM These are very good ditties, no bad attacks from me, I like them, I lost my mojo for years only just getting it back, finally I am listening to GOD's soft sweet voice guiding my poems, well done another enjoyable read for me, blessings sueellen Danesh Morgan August 3, 2013 at 9:48 AM thank you sue your friendship is my energy it is my sun light

Don Johnson August 1, 2013 at 4:42 PM sometimes at night the words rattle in my head ...nothing great but still instead...i get up and feed the computer ...and back to bed... love dramas do make good poetry mate! let your subconcious write ... it will... Danesh Morgan August 3, 2013 at 9:40 AM we are all our worst own critics. . . or are we? well mine is good, coz i put my soul into it but at times i do modify it, cut, redo and edit. . . thank you

Richard Lamoureux August 1, 2013 at 8:28 AM There is something to what Giorgio is saying. Yet there is a rawness in your words the evokes emotion and that my dear is poetry. I do feel however that this effort is but a minuscule part of the voice you possess. Danesh Morgan August 3, 2013 at 9:38 AM Richard you got half of it right, i am expressing what i felt that is also poetry. . thank you so much