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A thousand poems I write,
And not one of them I like,

Could I let you see that,
All my poems are bad.

I lost my gift with words,
And left alone with hurt.

It is too late to take back,
Now ready for your attacks!!!

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Giorgio Veneto
Metrical verse~contest

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/4/2013 1:52:00 PM

I can relate to this! When I write a poem, I never think that it is good enough. It's an agonizing feeling!...But, I just write from my heart and let others be the judge!....Great poem here, Danesh!

Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/4/2013 6:50:00 PM

Miss Kelly its good by its own. thanks for sharing your thoughts

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/2/2013 3:29:00 AM

These are very good ditties, no bad attacks from me, I like them, I lost my mojo for years only just getting it back, finally I am listening to GOD's soft sweet voice guiding my poems, well done another enjoyable read for me, blessings sueellen

Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/3/2013 9:48:00 AM

thank you sue your friendship is my energy it is my sun light

Don Johnson

Date: 8/1/2013 4:42:00 PM

sometimes at night the words rattle in my head ...nothing great but still instead...i get up and feed the computer ...and back to bed... love dramas do make good poetry mate! let your subconcious write ... it will...

Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/3/2013 9:40:00 AM

we are all our worst own critics. . . or are we? well mine is good, coz i put my soul into it but at times i do modify it, cut, redo and edit. . . thank you

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/1/2013 8:28:00 AM

There is something to what Giorgio is saying. Yet there is a rawness in your words the evokes emotion and that my dear is poetry. I do feel however that this effort is but a minuscule part of the voice you possess.

Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/3/2013 9:38:00 AM

Richard you got half of it right, i am expressing what i felt that is also poetry. . thank you so much

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