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Bad Place

Im in a bad place get out of my face I need my space cause its all you that I hate yall lean on me but its never reciprocal I always give but never receive Im always deceived though I never deceive ending this world would be a relief

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2011 1:59:00 PM

makes me want to cry! BIG hugs Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/30/2010 3:47:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Jessica. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/29/2010 4:38:00 PM

Nice rhyming and rhythmic write yet frustrating, jessica

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/29/2010 12:39:00 PM

Dear Jessica, I feel your pain. Sometimes people never give back and it hurts! But if you could look at it this way, you are filled with love which they seem to lack..and when your cup is filled it doesn't hurt to give some away! It'll come back to you, trust me. I'm older, I'm sure and I know this. Never give another person so much power to make you feel this bad..You keep the power that's yours. Blessings, peace, joy and happiness this coming New Year, my friend. God bless! Love, Audrey