Bad Place

Im in a bad place
get out of my face
I need my space cause its all you that I hate
yall lean on me but its never reciprocal
I always give but never receive 
Im always deceived though I never deceive
ending this world would be a relief
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 1:59 PM
makes me want to cry! BIG hugs Light & Love
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 3:47 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Jessica. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Nice rhyming and rhythmic write yet frustrating, jessica
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December 29, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Dear Jessica, I feel your pain. Sometimes people never give back and it hurts! But if you could look at it this way, you are filled with love which they seem to lack..and when your cup is filled it doesn't hurt to give some away! It'll come back to you, trust me. I'm older, I'm sure and I know this. Never give another person so much power to make you feel this bad..You keep the power that's yours. Blessings, peace, joy and happiness this coming New Year, my friend. God bless! Love, Audrey
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