Jessica Thompson Poet Rhyme

Bad Order

Bad Order
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I was feeling really hungry,
so we ordered from next door
where the food is always good
but this wasn't like before.

There was something missing,
I knew it from the start
and I grew so upset
and my lips begun to part.

I threw some words in anger,
I sounded like a baby
but when I order chicken
don't forget my gravy.

5/24/14-Jessica Thompson

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Tim Smith May 26, 2014 at 1:34 PM wonderful Jessica...I need it for my potatoes Jessica Thompson May 26, 2014 at 1:54 PM "Smiles" Thank you TIm :) Take Care~Jess

Mustapha Mohammed May 25, 2014 at 6:02 PM Cool write Jessica. I haven't seen you before. Welcome to the Soup. Its nice to meet you...smiles : ) Jessica Thompson May 25, 2014 at 6:09 PM Thank you Mustapha, glad you enjoyed my poem. And thank you for the welcome. It is nice to meet you as well. Have a wonderful day :) Jess

Phillip Fungurai May 25, 2014 at 3:38 PM Interesting poem Jessica! thank you for sharing/ / phillip Jessica Thompson May 25, 2014 at 5:01 PM Thank you Philip, glad you enjoyed my poem. Take care friend, Jess