Bad Order

Bad Order
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I was feeling really hungry,
so we ordered from next door
where the food is always good
but this wasn't like before.

There was something missing,
I knew it from the start
and I grew so upset
and my lips begun to part.

I threw some words in anger,
I sounded like a baby
but when I order chicken
don't forget my gravy.

5/24/14-Jessica Thompson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/26/2014 1:34:00 PM
wonderful Jessica...I need it for my potatoes
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 5/26/2014 1:54:00 PM
"Smiles" Thank you TIm :) Take Care~Jess
Date: 5/25/2014 6:02:00 PM
Cool write Jessica. I haven't seen you before. Welcome to the Soup. Its nice to meet you...smiles : )
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Date: 5/25/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Mustapha, glad you enjoyed my poem. And thank you for the welcome. It is nice to meet you as well. Have a wonderful day :) Jess
Date: 5/25/2014 3:38:00 PM
Interesting poem Jessica! thank you for sharing/ / phillip
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Date: 5/25/2014 5:01:00 PM
Thank you Philip, glad you enjoyed my poem. Take care friend, Jess
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