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o my goodness she accidentally let one loose the bus was crowded but that was no excuse afraid she’d ripped her dress of chiffon she was embarrassed but didn’t let on she knew the day was off to a bad start though she’d gotten away with that colossal fart got to work fifteen minutes late her boss threw a pail at her the animals couldn’t wait she'd rushed off as fast as she could when she made it to the fence knew she was good but then she accidentally let another loose scaring off a nervous frantic goose though feathers flew she finally caught it not her proudest moment she had to admit next off to feed an angry grumpy mongoose wouldn’t you know it… she accidentally let one loose to top off her first morning not going well told the zookeeper she wanted back to the unemployment carousel AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on July 6, 2018 for contest I ACCIDENTALLY LET ONE LOOSE sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA

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Date: 7/9/2018 9:49:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant Line, so so funny, good luck in contest. :))
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/9/2018 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Roy. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/6/2018 11:14:00 PM
HILARIOUS!!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2018 5:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, LM. LOL
Date: 7/6/2018 11:05:00 PM
Funny! Must to been bad for a zoo keeper to fire you!
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Date: 7/7/2018 5:52:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy. I was devastated ! LOL
Date: 7/6/2018 7:03:00 PM
Lol, enjoyed this fart story for the contest Line; Good luck in it!~Che :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/6/2018 7:40:00 PM
My favorite subject! Thank you, Cheryl, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/6/2018 12:10:00 PM
It happens to the best of us, Line!! loved it xxoo Happy Friday!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/6/2018 12:43:00 PM
O you had a job as a zookeeper's helper too, Mike? lol

Book: Shattered Sighs