Bad Language

don’t stop caring about nothing ~ you’ll just become twice as negative By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/21/2021 4:11:00 PM

Classic never thought about it this way until you just pointed it out Double Negative

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/21/2021 9:55:00 PM

Your right double negatives don’t always make a positive just a more positive negative cheers David

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/18/2021 7:22:00 AM

Ha ha, this is cleverly expressed.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/18/2021 7:50:00 AM

Thank you Richard, language is so manipulable, ask the solicitors amongst us.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/17/2021 7:06:00 PM

This Monoku is a deep plunge into eloquence and should savor each word; adding another obstacle to one's thoughts may push him to flourish in negativity. Best wishes my friend David

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/18/2021 12:25:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad, Ain’t it strange the way a few words, when strategically placed, and pondered deeply, can overload the rationale of logic, and appear positively negative, You are indeed an open minded man Lasaad, cheers David