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Bad Dreams

Tick tock
Hook's croc?

Door Creaks
It Speaks

"Snack time
Your Mine"

Eye Peaks
Kid freaks

Night screams
Bad dreams

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/2/2011 5:08:00 PM

Very original. I like! Always, Laura

Louis Rams

Date: 8/26/2011 5:53:00 PM

this is really different. bad dreams, i scream door creaks, i leak kid freaks, i peek your mine, with time and everything in verse and rhyme. (your poem really had me laughing)

Cory Long

Date: 5/25/2011 5:26:00 AM

this is great nicely done, thanks for your recent comments on my work. cory

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/24/2011 9:40:00 AM

eerie but abeauty, nick... how do you that?? greeat job! :) hugggs, nette

Chhutan Dey

Date: 5/24/2011 6:55:00 AM

Is It a nightmare dear?words collide to create meaning...fabulous!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/23/2011 5:35:00 PM

Beautiful images creating visuals, Nick

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2011 11:43:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Nick. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2011 11:40:00 AM

As one who suffers from nightmares, this footle series had special meaning for me, Nick. Those sounds we hear in the night -- the creaking door, ticking clock and other noises -- can produce the anxiety that generates bad dreams. Can really relate to this one. Great work! Love, Carolyn

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