Bad Dreams

Very original. I like! Always, Laura

this is really different. bad dreams, i scream door creaks, i leak kid freaks, i peek your mine, with time and everything in verse and rhyme. (your poem really had me laughing)

this is great nicely done, thanks for your recent comments on my work. cory

eerie but abeauty, nick... how do you that?? greeat job! :) hugggs, nette

Is It a nightmare dear?words collide to create meaning...fabulous!

Beautiful images creating visuals, Nick

Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Nick. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol

As one who suffers from nightmares, this footle series had special meaning for me, Nick. Those sounds we hear in the night -- the creaking door, ticking clock and other noises -- can produce the anxiety that generates bad dreams. Can really relate to this one. Great work! Love, Carolyn