Bl Devnath Poet Verse

Bad Design Falls In To Own Trap Never Lasts Long

a long cotton thread 
                                         rolling a strong stick
                            to make it fall in to its bad designed trap
                              if the stick looses its body with silence
                                    surely comes out from there
                          now the thread falls into own twisted rolling
                          can not make itself free from own feed back
                         bad design falls in to own trap never lasts long
                                             is it not true?

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Lynn Marie September 25, 2017 at 7:11 PM Very true and wonderfully conveyed. A creative piece with lovely soul BL :-) Bl Devnath October 1, 2017 at 1:35 PM Thanks my dear lovely friend for your uplifting comment. am was busy with Durga Puja Spiritual festval, sorry for late reply. Loved always, bl

Darlene De Beaulieu September 23, 2017 at 2:49 PM Yes I would say it is true.Hope you are having a nice weekend my friend. Bl Devnath September 24, 2017 at 12:45 PM Thanks my lovely dear friend for your agreed with me. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2017 at 1:52 PM - Great written and I totally agree with you - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend, my friend Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath September 23, 2017 at 2:38 PM Thanks my lovely dear friend for your appreciation. Loved always, bl