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Bad Design Falls In To Own Trap Never Lasts Long

a long cotton thread rolling a strong stick to make it fall in to its bad designed trap if the stick looses its body with silence surely comes out from there now the thread falls into own twisted rolling can not make itself free from own feed back bad design falls in to own trap never lasts long is it not true?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/25/2017 7:11:00 PM
Very true and wonderfully conveyed. A creative piece with lovely soul BL :-)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 10/1/2017 1:35:00 PM
Thanks my dear lovely friend for your uplifting comment. am was busy with Durga Puja Spiritual festval, sorry for late reply. Loved always, bl
Date: 9/23/2017 2:49:00 PM
Yes I would say it is true.Hope you are having a nice weekend my friend.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/24/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thanks my lovely dear friend for your agreed with me. Loved always, bl
Date: 9/23/2017 1:52:00 PM
- Great written and I totally agree with you - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend, my friend Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/23/2017 2:38:00 PM
Thanks my lovely dear friend for your appreciation. Loved always, bl

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