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Deep inside the sorrow Hollow words ring Again to be shut out March through the heart Pain in the solitude Always will bring Angst for a future lost At death we part! Contest:Visual of a Verso Sponsored by:Nette Onclaud Written by:Greg Hoffman. 8/20/2015

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Date: 9/1/2015 11:48:00 PM
Greg, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT
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Date: 8/30/2015 11:27:00 PM
Very wonderful verse Greg! Congrats on awesome win!
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Date: 8/30/2015 6:24:00 AM
Lovely interpretation of the visual Greg many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/29/2015 9:50:00 PM
Hey , WELL DONE, POET!!! Congrats for this win.
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