Nicole Sharon Brown Poet Rhyme

Bad Advice

Others seem to have all of the answers
To the questions in your life.
Yet, still the significant others lives,
Are filled with mishaps.
Are they really trying to help you?
Well, perhaps they could be holding you back,
From approaching the finish line,
And all you have is one more lap.



wrote in college @ ULM 
Spring 2004





wrote in college at ULM
Spring 2004

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 12, 2009 at 3:50 PM I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Jared Pickett November 12, 2009 at 10:23 AM Life is filled with bad advice..... I hear it all day every day.....:JP]