Bad 4tnite

Matt Caliri Contest Name New Language angus plonking wobbletrot, rode a hoss but should have not, had trubble with three magigator, not his tie a gettin straighter, wid a windsor knott. hoss him kinda wantum rootum, owner bloody wantum shootum, sandgoannas not taste 2beautum, wrong calibre no sight, worried fella not 2 bright, fella had a snake in shed, shootem rootem saddle ned, bullets bouncin yep mathilda, shot water tank empty un-filled her, insanitary is rite, bad 4tnite..
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February 19, 2012 at 7:28 PM
ha ha! Good one... Don... this made me smile lots... have a wonderful night... good luck in the contest,...pd...
Johnson Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 8:16 PM
stupid lines for a laugh, the sillier the bettter, comedy in dum dum park, oh no me bed is wetter.... this time...
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 3:28 PM
Very true indeed,I can see that you have had an adventurous journy.....enjoy to reading this story...thank you alot Don!!!Good luck ! - oxox Anne-Lise
Merryman Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 1:50 PM
An entertaining and fun write, Don. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
Goff Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:27 AM
much fun! DJ! and thanks for "typo" observation on "yew" tree!
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 5:40 AM
Okay..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..I guess that you are looking forward to some cooler winter weather or do you have winter there in the land down under?...Sara
Johnson Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 3:23 PM
well me old canadian mate wears stubby shorts and teeshirt summer and winter... been doing it last 30 years...he came for the heat he said...old Rhymer Halliwell....
Syed Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 9:27 PM
Nice one:) Funny indeed! best wishes for the contest:)
Magee-Dittberner Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 9:08 PM
Ha! It's so funny and contemporary! I love it. Anyway, best of luck in the contest! I'm in it too.  -KMD
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