Backyard Birds

My son put up a feeder
In his yard, right near a tree.
He added seed, not knowing
Whether any birds we’d see.

Yet half an hour later,
There appeared the leading guest
And soon the word, by twitter,
Traveled nest to nest to nest:

Some cardinals and chickadees,
Two brightly-yellow hued,
Plus half a dozen other types
All vying for the food.

Of course, a squirrel joined the crowd
To scarf the scattered seed,
Which hopefully, he would conclude,
Would satisfy his need.

I wonder how that first bird knew
That seed was even there
But I was so thrilled they all came
That I don’t even care.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 8:12 PM
Once the squirrel arrives, it is all over. They are PIGS. This made me smile.
Leffanta Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 11:44 AM
Loved your poem, but bird feeders have spread salmonella (and other diseases) coast-to-coast so government are encouraging everyone to remove them. you will still be able to watch squirrel antics on AFV.
Cunningham Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 1:33 AM
Lol. By twitter, they must have beaks like bloodhounds. Tom
Hankins Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 7:07 PM
True, so true. I have wondered the same thing. Either good eyesight or they smell it or some bird was watching all along and tweeted the news???
Merryman Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 4:51 PM
This is great, Ilene! You have to watch those squirrels cause they'll steal it all. Blessings, Kim M
Hicks Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Cute and full of color, Ilene. My favorite moment was the word passing from bird to bird to bird (so much nuances and communication that goes on in the animal word that we don't pay attention too).
Allison Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 4:20 PM
What a charming poem Ilene, I agree with you and think they must use twitter:-) hugs Jan xx
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