Backwards

backwards version for contest

good-bye
so for now I guess this is
that I cant buy
I need some time
but new entries are opening
my window is closing
everything
in between
I'm stuck in a different dimension
I hate him
I love him
I cant make a decision
I hate you
I love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 1, 2011 at 9:39 AM
Common subject, different version, leaves the reader with a question mark. Different, backwards, I like it! Thanks for sharring, Judy
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