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The Rondelet is a French form consisting of a single septet with two rhymes and one refrain: AbAabbA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats. The refrain consists of 4 syllables and the other lines are twice as long.

[PS: Awarded P.O.T.D. 2 May 2025]

Backstabbed

	
Out in the cold
Excluded by a former friend
Out in the cold
Betrayed for silver coins when sold
A deed I could not apprehend
And now perplexed alone I stand
Out in the cold

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John Loving Iii

November 1, 2025 at 3:31 PM

perfect discription. Trust is a weapon we use against ourselves.

Paul Callus

March 2, 2026 at 7:00 AM

Thank you for the feedback, John. Best regards // paul

Susan Lawrence

August 11, 2025 at 3:36 PM

I feel this from the inside out. It is a deep ache when this type of thing happens. A belated congratulations dear friend on your POTD. Hauntingly visceral. Hugs, Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 8, 2025 at 1:00 PM

Belated congrats on a POTD. Very well done, Paul.

Paul Callus

July 13, 2025 at 7:27 AM

Thank you, Andrea...it even took ME time to realize I had a p.o.t.d. :) Regards // paul

CayCay Godwin

May 26, 2025 at 4:59 PM

Got yourself some potd, huh? Congratulations to you! I'm smiling for you, Paul. I enjoyed your write and studying the form even though I'll probably forget it. It's ok, I'll forget I forgot it, no harm done. Good to spend time on your page. Hope all is golden ... CayCay

Paul Callus

June 23, 2025 at 11:54 AM

I thought I had replied to your comments which brought a smile that lingered pleasantly, dear CayCay...probably age plays tricks on me :) Thank you for stopping by, my friend. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

May 24, 2025 at 8:54 AM

Brings to mind Judas. I hope your Judas sees the error of their ways. Still it is difficult being betrayed by a friend.Congratulations on POTD. A resonate piece.

Johnson Vdev

May 23, 2025 at 8:24 PM

Sad but wisely said. Hard truth of life.

Paul Callus

May 24, 2025 at 2:58 AM

Thank you for stopping by and commenting, JV ~ Regards // paul

Quoth Theraven

May 19, 2025 at 10:33 PM

Paul, Sometimes strangers are born from the same home. Time seems to move a bit slower when you're out in the cold. -Richard

Michael Tor

May 15, 2025 at 9:52 PM

Paul I missed this one my friend. A late congratulations been away from the Soup hope to catch up. Love this Form you shared. Reminded me of Jesus betrayal. Your words touch the heart. Love your Poetry. A favorite my friend...

CayCay Godwin

May 10, 2025 at 7:41 AM

When I write a 'sad' poem you wonder if it is personal, I'll not do that because if someone excluded you, I'd have to hurt them. This is impressive, solid writing, Paul. Well done ... CayCay

Paul Callus

May 11, 2025 at 1:31 AM

You're such a nice person, CayCay! I'd have you as my bodyguard any day! :) Thank you for the lovely visit and feedback. Best regards // paul

Ink Empress

May 5, 2025 at 1:47 AM

A very deep and soulful poem this is dear paul, i have seen so many such situations and betrayals, and it isnt one that is easy to express or write about, but youv done it effortlessly in such a moving manner using this form of poetry in such a creative manner! This is a fave for me! Congratulations also on receiving potd! Well deserved. Sending you light always

Nette Onclaud

May 5, 2025 at 1:44 AM

this beautiful piece breaks me, paul...your wordpictures of betrayal slay,' silver coins when sold...' spill ink for more potds... congrats!

Deb M

May 3, 2025 at 5:21 AM

Congratulations Paul on POTD….Debx

Paul Callus

May 4, 2025 at 7:04 AM

Thank you, Deb. Hope you've been enjoying the weekend. ~ Regards // paul

Beryl Edmonds

May 3, 2025 at 1:16 AM

It’s a terrible thing to be backstabbed by a friend and to see friendship end. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl

Paul Callus

May 4, 2025 at 7:19 AM

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Beryl. Best regards // paul

Panagiota Romios

May 2, 2025 at 10:56 PM

Best to you Paul. You are a master with a pen and words, Congratulations Pangie…. Sometimes we know we are betrayed. Sometimes,people have the courage to tell us. Oh, last two lines…yes, it is a place of barreness and worse, learning to trust again is painful …man’s inhumanity to man. …Pangie

Paul Callus

May 8, 2025 at 12:48 AM

Thank you for your kind and generous comments, dear Pangie. Betrayal, when least expected, could ruin a person's life and leave a permanent scar. No wonder many find it hard to forgive :( Best regards // paul

Brandy Nicole

May 2, 2025 at 6:29 PM

Dear Paul, being betrayed for money is selfish indeed, especially by a former friend. I agree with Tommy, this happened to Jesus. Not a good feeling at all. Your thoughts touch my heart. Congratulations on receiving Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus

May 20, 2025 at 6:10 AM

Thank you for your insightful feedback, dear Brandy. Seems like ages since our paths last crossed, but when they do it's a double pleasure:) (I've had a lot on my plate; I need to start slowing down :)) Warm regards & Hugs my friend // paul

Tania Kitchin

May 2, 2025 at 11:50 AM

Paul, well penned, congratulations on POTD.

Paul Callus

March 2, 2026 at 6:36 AM

Thank you for liking and for the congrats, Tania. (Pls excuse my late reply!!) Regards // paul

Benjamin Bartley

May 2, 2025 at 11:20 AM

We've all been backstabbed who wanted this spotlight, but you got it! Congratulations!!! Thanks for the backstabbin' sharing!!! Left us all out in the cold. Ha! All in good fun.

Kim Rodrigues

May 2, 2025 at 10:55 AM

Yes, we know God takes betrayal seriously!

Paul Callus

March 2, 2026 at 6:32 AM

Thank you for the visit, Kim...and pls excuse the very late reply. Regards // paul

Jim Slaughter

May 2, 2025 at 10:38 AM

I've had a similar experience, Paul. Not a good feeling, at all. Congrats on POTD.

Paula Goldsmith

May 2, 2025 at 8:43 AM

Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Backstabbed" write again. Have a blessed day with your win...........

Paul Callus

May 4, 2025 at 7:12 AM

Thank you twice over Paula! Your visits are appreciated. Best regards // paul

Hilda Greenhough

May 2, 2025 at 7:53 AM

Words, so wisely aligned, create a poem of futile remorse. Congratulations on your POTD.

Warren Doll

May 2, 2025 at 7:52 AM

Paul, Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved! ~ Warren

Mickey Grubb

May 2, 2025 at 6:54 AM

Et tu, Brute? Congratulations on your POTD, Paul. Enjoy your special day.

Maria Williams

May 2, 2025 at 6:43 AM

How wonderful to see you getting the honour of the day Paul my lovely friend. Congratulations on your Rondelet. Its always a pleasure reading your poems, and so good seeing you post over here again. All the best ...Hugs