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The Rondelet is a French form consisting of a single septet with two rhymes and one refrain: AbAabbA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats. The refrain consists of 4 syllables and the other lines are twice as long.

[PS: Awarded P.O.T.D. 2 May 2025]

Out in the cold Excluded by a former friend Out in the cold Betrayed for silver coins when sold A deed I could not apprehend And now perplexed alone I stand Out in the cold

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/26/2025 4:59:00 PM

Got yourself some potd, huh? Congratulations to you! I'm smiling for you, Paul. I enjoyed your write and studying the form even though I'll probably forget it. It's ok, I'll forget I forgot it, no harm done. Good to spend time on your page. Hope all is golden ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/24/2025 8:54:00 AM

Brings to mind Judas. I hope your Judas sees the error of their ways. Still it is difficult being betrayed by a friend.Congratulations on POTD. A resonate piece.

Johnson Vdev

Date: 5/23/2025 8:24:00 PM

Sad but wisely said. Hard truth of life.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2025 2:58:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by and commenting, JV ~ Regards // paul

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/19/2025 10:33:00 PM

Paul, Sometimes strangers are born from the same home. Time seems to move a bit slower when you're out in the cold. -Richard

Michael Tor

Date: 5/15/2025 9:52:00 PM

Paul I missed this one my friend. A late congratulations been away from the Soup hope to catch up. Love this Form you shared. Reminded me of Jesus betrayal. Your words touch the heart. Love your Poetry. A favorite my friend...

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/10/2025 7:41:00 AM

When I write a 'sad' poem you wonder if it is personal, I'll not do that because if someone excluded you, I'd have to hurt them. This is impressive, solid writing, Paul. Well done ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 5/11/2025 1:31:00 AM

You're such a nice person, CayCay! I'd have you as my bodyguard any day! :) Thank you for the lovely visit and feedback. Best regards // paul

Ink Empress

Date: 5/5/2025 1:47:00 AM

A very deep and soulful poem this is dear paul, i have seen so many such situations and betrayals, and it isnt one that is easy to express or write about, but youv done it effortlessly in such a moving manner using this form of poetry in such a creative manner! This is a fave for me! Congratulations also on receiving potd! Well deserved. Sending you light always

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2025 1:44:00 AM

this beautiful piece breaks me, paul...your wordpictures of betrayal slay,' silver coins when sold...' spill ink for more potds... congrats!

Deb M

Date: 5/3/2025 5:21:00 AM

Congratulations Paul on POTD….Debx

Paul Callus
Date: 5/4/2025 7:04:00 AM

Thank you, Deb. Hope you've been enjoying the weekend. ~ Regards // paul

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/3/2025 1:16:00 AM

It’s a terrible thing to be backstabbed by a friend and to see friendship end. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl

Paul Callus
Date: 5/4/2025 7:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Beryl. Best regards // paul

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/2/2025 10:56:00 PM

Best to you Paul. You are a master with a pen and words, Congratulations Pangie…. Sometimes we know we are betrayed. Sometimes,people have the courage to tell us. Oh, last two lines…yes, it is a place of barreness and worse, learning to trust again is painful …man’s inhumanity to man. …Pangie

Paul Callus
Date: 5/8/2025 12:48:00 AM

Thank you for your kind and generous comments, dear Pangie. Betrayal, when least expected, could ruin a person's life and leave a permanent scar. No wonder many find it hard to forgive :( Best regards // paul

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/2/2025 6:29:00 PM

Dear Paul, being betrayed for money is selfish indeed, especially by a former friend. I agree with Tommy, this happened to Jesus. Not a good feeling at all. Your thoughts touch my heart. Congratulations on receiving Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2025 6:10:00 AM

Thank you for your insightful feedback, dear Brandy. Seems like ages since our paths last crossed, but when they do it's a double pleasure:) (I've had a lot on my plate; I need to start slowing down :)) Warm regards & Hugs my friend // paul

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/2/2025 11:50:00 AM

Paul, well penned, congratulations on POTD.

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 5/2/2025 11:20:00 AM

We've all been backstabbed who wanted this spotlight, but you got it! Congratulations!!! Thanks for the backstabbin' sharing!!! Left us all out in the cold. Ha! All in good fun.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/2/2025 10:55:00 AM

Yes, we know God takes betrayal seriously!

Jim Slaughter

Date: 5/2/2025 10:38:00 AM

I've had a similar experience, Paul. Not a good feeling, at all. Congrats on POTD.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/2/2025 8:43:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Backstabbed" write again. Have a blessed day with your win...........

Paul Callus
Date: 5/4/2025 7:12:00 AM

Thank you twice over Paula! Your visits are appreciated. Best regards // paul

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/2/2025 7:53:00 AM

Words, so wisely aligned, create a poem of futile remorse. Congratulations on your POTD.

Warren Doll

Date: 5/2/2025 7:52:00 AM

Paul, Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved! ~ Warren

Mickey Grubb

Date: 5/2/2025 6:54:00 AM

Et tu, Brute? Congratulations on your POTD, Paul. Enjoy your special day.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/2/2025 6:43:00 AM

How wonderful to see you getting the honour of the day Paul my lovely friend. Congratulations on your Rondelet. Its always a pleasure reading your poems, and so good seeing you post over here again. All the best ...Hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/2/2025 5:11:00 AM

Hello Paul, I am back to congratulate you on your POTD!! - Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Tom Woody

Date: 5/2/2025 5:01:00 AM

So good to see you here Paul. Enjoy your special day

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/2/2025 2:01:00 AM

Hello Paul, congratulations on your POTD win. It’s sad when things like that happen. Maybe it’s a blessing in disguise. Wishing you a wonderful day and a great weekend as you celebrate your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/2/2025 1:14:00 AM

- Betrayed by a "friend" ... is no friend, Paul - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs