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Backache

A backache 
sound of bones cracking
needs a massage 



September 11, 2013
5th Place Winner
For SKAT's "Haiku" Contest

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Shadow Hamilton

October 10, 2013 at 7:35 AM

nice poem like the flow ty for visiting my work Shadow x smile

Sandra Adams

September 29, 2013 at 7:58 AM

nothing more relaxing then a massage...nice haiku :)

Nette Onclaud

September 26, 2013 at 3:51 AM

i love thai massage.. i was just there a month ago, my 5th visit, and your work makes me want to be pampered again... absolutely inviting, paz!.. sweet congrats..:) huggs

Bukang Liwayway

October 19, 2013 at 11:10 AM

i will wait for you here ;)

Nette Onclaud

September 28, 2013 at 11:14 AM

did i hear " sjiatsu?".. am on my wa there!..:) sweetness!

Bukang Liwayway

September 26, 2013 at 11:41 AM

thank friend Nette..if ever you visit thailand Again just let me know :) I will give you a free "Shiatsu" have a nice day

Shadow Hamilton

September 25, 2013 at 11:27 AM

congrats on placing Shadow x smile

Bukang Liwayway

September 26, 2013 at 11:43 AM

thanks Shadow :)

Sandra Adams

September 25, 2013 at 9:35 AM

nicely penned...congrats on your win :)

Bukang Liwayway

September 26, 2013 at 11:44 AM

thanks friend Sandra ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 25, 2013 at 4:53 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Maria

Bukang Liwayway

September 26, 2013 at 11:45 AM

thanks Dr. Ram ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 25, 2013 at 3:39 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Maria . - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

September 26, 2013 at 11:48 AM

thanks friend Anne. God bless

Andrea Dietrich

September 24, 2013 at 11:47 PM

Yep, that is what I need too!!! Congrats on your win.

Skat A

September 24, 2013 at 5:53 PM

Maria, loving your win. Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT

Bukang Liwayway

September 26, 2013 at 11:46 AM

thanks SKAT. God bless

Jack Horne

September 22, 2013 at 3:56 PM

ouch, my back hurt just reading this, lol - excellent write

Sara Kendrick

September 18, 2013 at 5:20 AM

Reads as though one needs some youth tonic for the disc..Know exactly the feeling and sound from experience..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

September 16, 2013 at 12:32 PM

Awe, Maria, it sounds achy. great haiku. Hope you get the massage for them aching bones... xox~ Linda

Bukang Liwayway

September 26, 2013 at 11:37 AM

i change my mind to have a thia massage..I am bedridden for days because of my backache but I'm fine no..thanks dear PD

Mustapha Mohammed

September 15, 2013 at 11:47 PM

The massage therapist is on his way. Gift wrapped...lol.

Mustapha Mohammed

September 15, 2013 at 11:48 PM

Lovely poem by the way my friend.

Ravi Sathasivam

September 15, 2013 at 11:47 PM

Excellent. Well said. Tfs

Bukang Liwayway

September 26, 2013 at 11:36 AM

thanks friend :)

Len Gasun

September 15, 2013 at 12:23 AM

Oh, your very beautiful poem made me think that I also probably need massage my very dear friend Maria. But, not the thai massage anymore unless I can instruct them well to do it more gently in their language ;))) but, i think I'll have siatsu )) safer for a delicate me ;)) A great poem indeed. I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Big big hugs! love lots, Leonora

Bukang Liwayway

September 16, 2013 at 10:42 PM

I changed my mind to have a thai massage..I want "Siatsu" but who will do it? I can give you a siatsu..just tell me when :) :) for free :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 11, 2013 at 8:59 AM

- Yes ..... they have I heard and felt many times.... I NEED MASSAGE !!! - Well written, Maria !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

September 11, 2013 at 9:41 AM

I will give you free massage :) :) Next week, I plan to have a thai massage...good luck to me :) thanks for passing by friend Anne

Vicky Tsiluma

September 11, 2013 at 12:18 AM

Hi Maria - well penned! I love how the poem manages to bring to mind the pain caused when one experiences backache. nicely done.

Bukang Liwayway

September 11, 2013 at 8:54 AM

thanks friend Vicky :)

Andrea Dietrich

September 10, 2013 at 5:01 PM

ouch, that poor aching back. I would love one of those massages, sweetie. Can you get me one?

Bukang Liwayway

September 11, 2013 at 8:54 AM

yes, friend Andrea, I can give you a soothing massage..I know "Siatsu Massage Therapy" but right now my back is a little better now..foolish of me to sit in front of the computer for a long time..thanks for passing by

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