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Backache

A backache sound of bones cracking needs a massage September 11, 2013 5th Place Winner For SKAT's "Haiku" Contest

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/10/2013 7:35:00 AM

nice poem like the flow ty for visiting my work Shadow x smile

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/29/2013 7:58:00 AM

nothing more relaxing then a massage...nice haiku :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/26/2013 3:51:00 AM

i love thai massage.. i was just there a month ago, my 5th visit, and your work makes me want to be pampered again... absolutely inviting, paz!.. sweet congrats..:) huggs

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/19/2013 11:10:00 AM

i will wait for you here ;)

Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/28/2013 11:14:00 AM

did i hear " sjiatsu?".. am on my wa there!..:) sweetness!

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/26/2013 11:41:00 AM

thank friend Nette..if ever you visit thailand Again just let me know :) I will give you a free "Shiatsu" have a nice day

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/25/2013 11:27:00 AM

congrats on placing Shadow x smile

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/26/2013 11:43:00 AM

thanks Shadow :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/25/2013 9:35:00 AM

nicely penned...congrats on your win :)

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/26/2013 11:44:00 AM

thanks friend Sandra ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/25/2013 4:53:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Maria

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/26/2013 11:45:00 AM

thanks Dr. Ram ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2013 3:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Maria . - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/26/2013 11:48:00 AM

thanks friend Anne. God bless

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 11:47:00 PM

Yep, that is what I need too!!! Congrats on your win.

Skat A

Date: 9/24/2013 5:53:00 PM

Maria, loving your win. Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/26/2013 11:46:00 AM

thanks SKAT. God bless

Jack Horne

Date: 9/22/2013 3:56:00 PM

ouch, my back hurt just reading this, lol - excellent write

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2013 5:20:00 AM

Reads as though one needs some youth tonic for the disc..Know exactly the feeling and sound from experience..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/16/2013 12:32:00 PM

Awe, Maria, it sounds achy. great haiku. Hope you get the massage for them aching bones... xox~ Linda

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/26/2013 11:37:00 AM

i change my mind to have a thia massage..I am bedridden for days because of my backache but I'm fine no..thanks dear PD

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/15/2013 11:47:00 PM

Excellent. Well said. Tfs

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/26/2013 11:36:00 AM

thanks friend :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/15/2013 11:47:00 PM

The massage therapist is on his way. Gift wrapped...lol.

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 9/15/2013 11:48:00 PM

Lovely poem by the way my friend.

Len Gasun

Date: 9/15/2013 12:23:00 AM

Oh, your very beautiful poem made me think that I also probably need massage my very dear friend Maria. But, not the thai massage anymore unless I can instruct them well to do it more gently in their language ;))) but, i think I'll have siatsu )) safer for a delicate me ;)) A great poem indeed. I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Big big hugs! love lots, Leonora

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/16/2013 10:42:00 PM

I changed my mind to have a thai massage..I want "Siatsu" but who will do it? I can give you a siatsu..just tell me when :) :) for free :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/11/2013 8:59:00 AM

- Yes ..... they have I heard and felt many times.... I NEED MASSAGE !!! - Well written, Maria !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/11/2013 9:41:00 AM

I will give you free massage :) :) Next week, I plan to have a thai massage...good luck to me :) thanks for passing by friend Anne

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/11/2013 12:18:00 AM

Hi Maria - well penned! I love how the poem manages to bring to mind the pain caused when one experiences backache. nicely done.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/11/2013 8:54:00 AM

thanks friend Vicky :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2013 5:01:00 PM

ouch, that poor aching back. I would love one of those massages, sweetie. Can you get me one?

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/11/2013 8:54:00 AM

yes, friend Andrea, I can give you a soothing massage..I know "Siatsu Massage Therapy" but right now my back is a little better now..foolish of me to sit in front of the computer for a long time..thanks for passing by