Back On Track

Just because we’ve
been disputing
Doesn’t mean we
should be putting
Our relationship on
hold
We should take a
step that’s bold
Finding the strength
we both need
Before we set each
other free
We don’t need to
deliberate
The years together
have been great
Our love was on a
speedy track
Why cant we get it
all back
Side by side as we
both win
The race we started
way back when
Both our hearts were
true and open
With the love that
we were hopin’
Wouldn’t change
throughout the years
We never had worries
or fears
About the fact not
to conceal
This love we have is
very real
I’m asking you just
one more time
If you would look
and change your mind
And take my heart so
we can soar
Please step inside
and close the door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 7/29/2014 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations... PD
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:21:00 PM
Big congrats on a great write and fine win!!!
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:21:00 PM
The desireis strong to save a relationship, great one, grats on your win;)
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Date: 7/28/2014 9:18:00 AM
Hi Robin, huge congratulations on your great well-deserved win. Pandita
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Robin. Kika
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Date: 7/28/2014 4:40:00 AM
A fine write crafted well with wisdom, robin. congrats
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Date: 7/2/2014 5:38:00 PM
Hope it gets back on the right track and it doesn't go off the rails Robin - love this write. hugs as ever Jan xxx
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Date: 7/2/2014 5:00:00 PM
A love that's worth saving, Robin. words of wisdom that come straight from the heart. Both hearts must feel the same to come back together and sometimes it is not meant to be. Very well written, my friend.... Robert.
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