Back In Time (Contest)

November 2008, my fate.
Just her and I studying alone.
Just friends I thought, I was wrong.
My dreams did come true.
She looked at me.
Be my boyfriend.
She asked.
I said 
No
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Chris u will need to add two more verses of Nonet to qualify for my contest luv... enjoyed first verse...please add the other two for competition..thankxxx for supporting ..luv..
Matt Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 5:51 AM
NO, what it means is, she asked me out and I got nervous and said no. I would give anything to go back and change that.
D. Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 8:46 PM
oi, does that mean you went back in time to tell the person no?. keep cool
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