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"I've seen a dead bird flying through a broken sky, wish I could flap wings and fly away" Hip hop artist Nas from his song " You're the Man" Inspired this write: Police plant evidence, to get their man. because they can. "The Man" with the iron pimp slap, fifteen to life in one back hand. Jared Pickett 2/8/2010 Asavvy1

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/21/2010 4:46:00 AM
You comin'together with alot of unique literature my friend. Keep stokin' the stove! Enjoyed this one. -Robert
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Date: 3/14/2010 11:33:00 AM
Hey Jared, Thanks for leaving your comments on my piece. ...I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf... ..Jimmy
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Date: 3/12/2010 9:09:00 PM
This little one packs a whallop!
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:03:00 PM
uh i don't know about that, I have family that has been arested and they deserved it. Not to say that there isn't injustice--the elite get a blind eye to their crimes.
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Date: 3/11/2010 9:05:00 PM
U said it all in a few words Mr. J.. your words are true .. was married to a cop for 12 years.. Nas is right .. and so are u..luv.. "Sweetheart" ...
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Date: 3/11/2010 8:26:00 PM
Ain't nuttin wrong wit this one...it's BAD!! Marty
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Date: 3/10/2010 9:57:00 AM
INTRESTING . This is a reality..Enjoyed reading...keep up the good words for us....
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Date: 3/10/2010 8:04:00 AM
this happens all the time Son....it is unfortunate...Wonderful write as always...Love Dad
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Date: 3/9/2010 4:24:00 PM
Interesting write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/9/2010 10:33:00 AM
Nas is an amazing rapper
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Date: 3/8/2010 2:40:00 PM
It aint an equal or a fair world! I don't know who Nas is, but I can dig his stuff. BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 3/8/2010 11:10:00 AM
I say as Ruben said..Concise,concrete,potent,powerful and excellent..Charma:)
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