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Baby Wishes

Precious, life sustaining oxygen flows no longer; linking chord tethering me severed, I lie upon hard cold table. I see cloudy images--a table holds my angel mother. Sweet red blood flows from soft nurturing nest once holding me. Mommy, don’t discard your babe. Look at me! Life can be saved. An abortion table Should not separate with death our love flows. Love flows away. Save me from this table. Copyright, July 17, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 8/4/2014 4:36:00 PM
Wow so unique, vibrant and oh I just want to hug you after reading this, well done, grats on your win
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:56:00 AM
A powerful message! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:12:00 AM
Wow that's lovely Faye! Quite touchy,, all lines beautifully crafted to perfection! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 8/3/2014 7:41:00 AM
Faye, thank you for sharing your precious write. Congratulations. Linda
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Date: 8/3/2014 6:02:00 AM
this is such an original and hard hitting take on the theme, I would've placed it much higher! you've managed to say a lot with such a short, restrictive form; those first two stanzas are particularly strong - congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/3/2014 4:57:00 AM
nice one on saving the baby from cold death. Congrats, Faye.
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Date: 8/2/2014 11:32:00 PM
A very fine poem. Big congrats on your win!!
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Date: 8/2/2014 8:48:00 PM
OMG. this one is SO different and it's SO good. I am surprised it is below mine on the list. Or hopefully it is at least same number placement as mine. What a powerful poem!!
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Date: 8/2/2014 3:40:00 PM
A unique take on baby theme, Faye! Very touching...goes to show how precious life is! Congrats on your lovely win. // paul
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Date: 8/2/2014 2:48:00 PM
forceful, deep piece, faye.. congrats and huggs
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Date: 7/22/2014 9:57:00 PM
Straightforward and intense. Thanks for sharing. LoveLots, Ara
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Date: 7/20/2014 9:10:00 AM
Beautifully thought provoking poetry, I think that the soul turns the page, and then moves on to the next sentences...Keith.
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Date: 7/19/2014 5:48:00 AM
I have often wondered what the soul thinks in this circumstance. Very powerful poem, Faye. You have given a voice that is rarely heard. Quite thought provoking, my friend..... Robert.
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:55:00 PM
Scarey the thoughts that exude from this piece...
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Date: 7/18/2014 2:27:00 PM
powerful write indeed
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Date: 7/18/2014 2:47:00 AM
Faye this is so intense ,, touched my heart,, lovely write my friend // Upma //
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Date: 7/17/2014 9:06:00 PM
This goes through the heart. i love this write, Faye. :)) Maria
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