Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

Baby Snails Nursery Rhyme

Baby snails had a garden race,
old gnome would time their hasty chase,
slow jo, low creep lined up at crease,
both bragged they would win it with ease,
the race started with wave of flag,
three feet from big pot to old bag
“Angels!” he said “can’t wait anymore!”
when the race finished they heard him snore!

1st placement
Written 07/March/2021
Eve Roper sponsored
Nursery rhyme poetry contest
syllables 8 each line and 9 last tow lines!

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Sara Kendrick March 18, 2021 at 10:26 AM Ha!! Ha!! I think this would get a good laugh from a little boy who understood snails. Congrats on this winner in Eve's contest. Sara Krish Radhakrishna March 18, 2021 at 12:11 PM Thanks Sara! Hope children like it! Thanks for the visit and your support!

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2021 at 9:34 AM haha, that ending was so cute!! Congrats to you for the win Krish Radhakrishna March 12, 2021 at 10:16 AM Thanks Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2021 at 4:06 AM - Smile :) - Congratulations on your win, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Krish Radhakrishna March 12, 2021 at 5:44 AM Thank you Anne-Lise! It was slow paced!:)

Eve Roper March 11, 2021 at 8:57 PM Krish, love your very creative nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your win. hugs Eve Krish Radhakrishna March 11, 2021 at 11:33 PM Thanks Eve for the contest and my generous placement! Hope new nursery rhymes catch on with the children!

Gershon Wolf March 11, 2021 at 5:28 PM Great way to pass the time! Zzzzzz. lol. Congrats on your win in the contest, Krish. :) gw Krish Radhakrishna March 11, 2021 at 7:26 PM Thanks Gershon! one speedy race!:)

Alexis Y. March 11, 2021 at 2:14 PM Hi Krish, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Krish Radhakrishna March 11, 2021 at 2:24 PM Thanks Alexis! :)

Beryl Edmonds March 8, 2021 at 8:27 AM That’s a splendid nursery rhyme Krish, kids will love it. Belle Krish Radhakrishna March 8, 2021 at 10:00 AM Thanks Belle! would be nice if we can generate new nursery rhymes! Humpty Dumpty broke down years ago!:)

Regina Mcintosh March 7, 2021 at 2:28 PM So cute. Adorable. Love, Gina Krish Radhakrishna March 8, 2021 at 9:59 AM Thanks Gina! Love your support!