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Baby Snails Nursery Rhyme

Baby snails had a garden race, old gnome would time their hasty chase, slow jo, low creep lined up at crease, both bragged they would win it with ease, the race started with wave of flag, three feet from big pot to old bag “Angels!” he said “can’t wait anymore!” when the race finished they heard him snore!
1st placement Written 07/March/2021 Eve Roper sponsored Nursery rhyme poetry contest syllables 8 each line and 9 last tow lines!

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Date: 3/18/2021 10:26:00 AM
Ha!! Ha!! I think this would get a good laugh from a little boy who understood snails. Congrats on this winner in Eve's contest. Sara
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/18/2021 12:11:00 PM
Thanks Sara! Hope children like it! Thanks for the visit and your support!
Date: 3/12/2021 9:34:00 AM
haha, that ending was so cute!! Congrats to you for the win
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Date: 3/12/2021 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 3/12/2021 4:06:00 AM
- Smile :) - Congratulations on your win, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2021 5:44:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! It was slow paced!:)
Date: 3/11/2021 8:57:00 PM
Krish, love your very creative nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your win. hugs Eve
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/11/2021 11:33:00 PM
Thanks Eve for the contest and my generous placement! Hope new nursery rhymes catch on with the children!
Date: 3/11/2021 5:28:00 PM
Great way to pass the time! Zzzzzz. lol. Congrats on your win in the contest, Krish. :) gw
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/11/2021 7:26:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! one speedy race!:)
Date: 3/11/2021 2:14:00 PM
Hi Krish, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/11/2021 2:24:00 PM
Thanks Alexis! :)
Date: 3/8/2021 8:27:00 AM
That’s a splendid nursery rhyme Krish, kids will love it. Belle
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/8/2021 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Belle! would be nice if we can generate new nursery rhymes! Humpty Dumpty broke down years ago!:)
Date: 3/7/2021 2:28:00 PM
So cute. Adorable. Love, Gina
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/8/2021 9:59:00 AM
Thanks Gina! Love your support!

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