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baby lion

You bought a baby lion And you didn't tell Then you made me watch as you wrestled it You laughed and blinked A fateful blink for that was your last Off you fell to your chilling lust.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 2/16/2015 12:08:00 PM
Good write njeri but it is not a haiku. Haiku is always 5-7-5 and on nature. Try it. God bless. I know you love nature. Love...rajat
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Date: 2/18/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Rajat. To be honest am still learning about all these Forms of poetry. I get so confused sometimes and I sometimes guess what my poems are . thank you for correcting me on this one. Be blessed