Baby I'Ll Bite Down

Inspired by Nancy Sinatras Song "Bang Bang" http://youtu.be/T5Xl0Qry-hA

In this little heart of mine
filled with sunshine, smiles, and crime
I let it roam and let it play
but looks for you all night and day

Fang Fang
I'll hunt you down
Fang fang
You'll hit the ground
Fang Fang
I'll catch you soon
Fang Fang baby I'll bite down

He's made of skin and I of fur
My winter love makes him burr
I'll sneak right in without a stir
Then he will be mine for sure

Fang fang 
I'll pounce you down
Fang Fang
You'll hit the ground
Fang Fang
How the blood will come out
Fang Fang
Baby I'll bite down..

My love is strong and it is weak
I'm the tallest mountain in the shallowest peak
He hears me roar but not when I speak
How can ones face be so bleak?

Fang Fang
he pounced me first
Fang Fang
It was the worst
Fang Fang 
My heart just burst

Fang Fang
My baby bit me down.

By:
B. Maxine Waldrep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/10/2014 6:08:00 PM
lovely win Maxine, SKAT
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Date: 2/6/2014 10:05:00 PM
Lol @ your response to Bryan....too funny. ..I really enjoyed reading your work. .I look forward to reading more my friend.
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Date: 2/6/2014 3:30:00 PM
SHALL i bite you there as well, i loved the reading Love Bryan xoxo
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Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 2/7/2014 3:15:00 PM
i can feat on your aroma im sure about B. De Poet
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B. Maxine Revolution
Date: 2/6/2014 6:02:00 PM
Not much left of me to feast upon! I appreciate the gesture though :) Thank you for reading -R.R.
Date: 1/15/2014 9:13:00 AM
I noticed your name on the winners' list ...Great lyrical work ..Congrats..Sara
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B. Maxine Revolution
Date: 2/6/2014 6:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara! I appreciate the time you took for such kind words :) R.R.
Date: 1/8/2014 11:22:00 PM
What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win,Britney
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B. Maxine Revolution
Date: 2/6/2014 6:04:00 PM
So much kind words!! thank you.
Date: 1/3/2014 10:58:00 PM
A nice flow, and beat....Britney,... keep them new poems coming... LINDA
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B. Maxine Revolution
Date: 2/6/2014 6:04:00 PM
Sorry for a late reply all this love from PS is so wonderful and greatly appreciated I'll be sure to stop by soon! -R.R.
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