Baby Blues

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This one is a bit of fun after watching a newly fledged blue tit chase its mother (or father?) for morsels around and aroundand in and out of the forsythia bush in our garden.

pip pip                         	pip 
pipes the fledged    	  blue tit
after mummy           	  blue tit
for a new                       tit bit
as she flew              bit and bit
branch and branch   tip and tip
cannot sit                      sit  sit 
chased by blue             baby tit
piping pip                 	piping pip
piping pip                      pip pip

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