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Baby

I'll cry my eyes out and dance in the rain, Just to make myself numb from the pain, Caused by your cry, echoing so loud and broken, Passing slowly, skin growing cold, leaving me alone, Wishing nothing but to have you in my arms to hold, Your young soul already torn, battered and sold, How can I even begin to make up for my horrid sins, All I wish to do is have your loving forgiveness, i've waited so patiently for a day I could say, 'Good morning baby, have a nice day,'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/20/2011 2:29:00 PM
Interesting work..The topic of sorry for wrong for the past is an interesting one..If one is truly sorry and plans to do better that would be wonderful for all involved..Sara
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Date: 12/13/2010 4:41:00 AM
I feel and understand this poem - totally...
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Date: 12/13/2010 4:00:00 AM
WOW .... this ... brought tears, i am sorry for your loss, i couldnt immagine the pain before but by reading this ... perhaps i can. Thank you for sharing this, it meant a lot to me. wishing you well in all that you do .... Ryland
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