Baby

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Baby’s breath so sweet
Rose-petal velvet soft skin
Innocent and pure

daughterhaiku

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Ernilando Tugaff

April 1, 2009 at 1:37 PM

Yes Cynthia, I miss the days when my children are still babies. Babies are sweet, innocent. I like your Haiku. Ernilando

Christopher Higgins

March 25, 2009 at 9:52 AM

Yes, my friend, the love...the softness...all coming through in your words.

Raul Moreno

March 19, 2009 at 11:53 PM

Innocence at its best in this nicely penned haiku...Raul

James Marshall Goff

March 19, 2009 at 8:43 AM

pure feeling, nice! Jim

L'Nass Shango

March 19, 2009 at 7:11 AM

Suddenly my eyes bring all the scents to my nose. Sweet! Love always

Arany P.

March 18, 2009 at 11:18 PM

this is what i imagined when i wrote 'Inoncence'... i pictured what my mother would have felt.. i am the only daughter so that should have been a moment! this is a beautiful haiku, Cynthia... i like your name! ~ Arany