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Baby Baby’s breath so sweet Rose-petal velvet soft skin Innocent and pure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/1/2009 1:37:00 PM
Yes Cynthia, I miss the days when my children are still babies. Babies are sweet, innocent. I like your Haiku. Ernilando
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Date: 3/25/2009 9:52:00 AM
Yes, my friend, the love...the softness...all coming through in your words.
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Date: 3/19/2009 11:53:00 PM
Innocence at its best in this nicely penned haiku...Raul
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Date: 3/19/2009 8:43:00 AM
pure feeling, nice! Jim
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Date: 3/19/2009 7:11:00 AM
Suddenly my eyes bring all the scents to my nose. Sweet! Love always
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Date: 3/18/2009 11:18:00 PM
this is what i imagined when i wrote 'Inoncence'... i pictured what my mother would have felt.. i am the only daughter so that should have been a moment! this is a beautiful haiku, Cynthia... i like your name! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/18/2009 10:02:00 PM
I like the way this one flows with the natural form of life. Very well done. Smiles from Lolita
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