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hate veiled behind metaphors deceives like a wolf in sheep's clothing - baa

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/20/2024 3:04:00 PM

Baleful asinine artifice..I was going to put it could be many things.' Then I concluded that They are quite thick..Those we oppose.' Pendantic and predictive its just how they tick !

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/19/2024 1:40:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your powerful "Baa" write/great picture Few words with much said... Have a blessed day.................

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 1/19/2024 11:52:00 AM

A wonderful monoku! Have a blessed evening dear poet!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/19/2024 5:39:00 AM

Whatever wrapping is used, veiled hate is still an act of cowardice. Very well expressed S1 ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2024 12:01:00 AM

Awesome one liner. Loved your title. It was the same word on my mask I was wearing in stores a few years back!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/18/2024 7:41:00 PM

Oh, yeah, it can! Add a big smile to those metaphors, and you can REALLY do a number on people! Well said, S.O. Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2024 1:18:00 PM

Yes, hate can crop up most anywhere. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 1:20:00 PM

Thanks Sara..

Jude Herrick

Date: 1/18/2024 1:13:00 PM

This is very true. That is why innuendo is so naughty.

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 1:20:00 PM

Yes but innuendo done with taste is ok...innuendo isn't hate..some like to use certain words to offend a whole race of people sadly.. thanks Jude

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/18/2024 9:39:00 AM

Very clever SO, the (Baa) is such a great metaphor that sends your whole monoku about veiled metaphor to another level, brilliant, cheers David!

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 12:45:00 PM

Thanks David... was just playing around wirh words and thoigh Baa would make it funny

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/18/2024 9:36:00 AM

Indeed, so true! Dear Silent One, your rapier pen cuts to the heart of the matter with poetic finesse. A potent and pulsing Monoku. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 12:50:00 PM

Thanks

Stephan McBride

Date: 1/18/2024 8:37:00 AM

That's a hilarious but yet truthful picture and poem to enhance the true message to gain from this, love it : )

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 12:50:00 PM

I agree..Thanks

Paul Bell

Date: 1/18/2024 8:33:00 AM

Plenty out there, silent killers.

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 12:50:00 PM

Thanks

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/18/2024 7:20:00 AM

So true and well said, SO!

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 12:50:00 PM

Thanks

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/18/2024 7:11:00 AM

Oh Silent One, I agree with your final assessment ! I'd rather be a Black Sheep, I may not fit with the rest of the flock but at least you'd know it! Love your Monoku, Happy Thursday!

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 7:15:00 AM

As long as you don't turn into a wolf and hide in sheep skin, fooling people.. Which I know you will not... Thanks

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/18/2024 5:12:00 AM

Interesting! Poets especially reveal themselves between the lines. Very baa’d! Very baa’d indeed!

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 7:17:00 AM

Yes, and some like to spread lies trying to be clever with metaphors... but so do people in our lives who are not poets.. Thanks Kim..

Tom Woody

Date: 1/18/2024 4:50:00 AM

And yet it continues...

Tom Woody
Date: 1/18/2024 1:38:00 PM

Gosh you got me uh, yeah I can see that

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 12:46:00 PM

Depends what continues..I've been informed that this has been insinuated as someone on here..its not about anyone on soup...why would it be?

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 1/18/2024 3:18:00 AM

Baaabaaaa … yesss…multiple f&@: face disorder aee!! messed up brain f@*ked creatures .. those r for the ones who r soo insecure abt what their word holds…can’t speak in their own true nature… need to baa baa here baaa baaa there …

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 12:49:00 PM

You seem very angry with someone...don't worry they will be gone down lol

Ink Empress

Date: 1/18/2024 3:06:00 AM

Yea like baa baa black sheep, but some metaphors are not so deep enough, and some mirror the dirt within ones soul, like the fake eyelashes some wear, or weaves. Looks pretty good for the souls that arent too deep but hate i can feel between words no matter what sorta riddles one writes, i can feel energy through words, and i stay away from dark energy and baa’s arent so good for my kundalini! Lol brilliant powerful monoku. Sorry for the rambling . my comments can be a bit “OFF” sometimes

Silent One
Date: 1/18/2024 12:47:00 PM

Nothing wrong with a ramble...thank you