Richard Lamoureux Poet Rhyme

Ba Baa Baaa-D Wolf

He knitted her a Sheepish Grin,
tried to pull the wool over her eyes.
The stylish wolf, wearing Sheep's clothing,
virgin wool was his ultimate prize!
But the sheep she was too clever and wise!


For C.T.'s Wool Contest

What I have made of the wool is a story, I hope you enjoy it!

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Red Fiery May 17, 2016 at 2:36 AM Congratulations!!! I just came back to visit you....knock ~ Knock~it's me Red~...sending you hugs Richard Lamoureux May 17, 2016 at 3:17 AM Hi Red, hugs back to you.

Carol Eastman February 13, 2016 at 4:14 PM A wonderful write! Definately briliant! LOL!

Timothy Hicks February 11, 2016 at 3:19 PM Ha! So many puns and wordplay all wrapped into one. A+ for creativity I'd say! I'm reminded of Little Red Riding Hood gone poem.

Poet Destroyer A February 7, 2016 at 9:29 AM :) LINDA

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 12:21 AM Richard, ;), you are so kind, thank you for the nice reply to my comment. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. XoX LINDA :):);) Richard Lamoureux January 31, 2016 at 9:16 AM No thanks required, hugs Rick.

Poet Destroyer A January 29, 2016 at 8:18 PM Richard, congrats on your WOOLISH win. XOX -LINDA- Richard Lamoureux January 29, 2016 at 8:21 PM Thanks Linda. Hugs Rick.

Ingrid Showalter Swift January 27, 2016 at 10:30 AM "He knitted her a Sheepish Grin" deliciously evil Richard Lamoureux January 29, 2016 at 8:21 PM Thanks Ingrid:0)

Ingrid Showalter Swift January 25, 2016 at 1:54 PM Love it! Richard Lamoureux January 27, 2016 at 10:29 AM Thanks Ingrid.

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2016 at 3:26 PM But if she was too clever and wise, that virgin wool was NOT his prize. heehee. I really enjoyed what you did here, richard. Congrats to you. Richard Lamoureux January 27, 2016 at 10:28 AM ;0) thanks.

Paul Callus January 24, 2016 at 1:29 PM Very creative, Richard! That sheepish grin really appealed to me:) Congratulations on placing second in this contest! ~ // paul Richard Lamoureux January 27, 2016 at 10:28 AM Thanks Paul.

Anisha Dutta January 23, 2016 at 10:12 PM Congrats Richard to win the contest. Anisha D Richard Lamoureux January 27, 2016 at 10:28 AM Thanks Anisha.

White Sage January 22, 2016 at 3:55 AM well written rhyme Richard...congrats on your win Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2016 at 4:41 AM Thanks White Sage.

Casarah Nance January 21, 2016 at 6:42 PM Clever. and it looks like a grats is in order. Sending you smiles my friend :) Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2016 at 4:40 AM Smiles and hugs back to you dear one.

Jan Allison January 21, 2016 at 5:59 PM Very witty Richard:-) congrats:-) hugs jan xx Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2016 at 4:40 AM Thanks and a big hug back.

Joseph May January 21, 2016 at 3:23 PM Congrats on your win! Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2016 at 4:39 AM Thanks Joseph

Skat A January 21, 2016 at 12:14 PM Richard, Congrats on your Wooly wool win. Love **SKAT** Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2016 at 4:39 AM Thanks SKAT. Hugs Rick.

James Inman January 21, 2016 at 10:22 AM Very nice Richard, we had a somewhat similar idea but mine was darker. Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2016 at 4:38 AM I enjoyed yours as well. Thanks for commenting.

Rob Carmack January 21, 2016 at 9:57 AM Congrats Richard. Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2016 at 4:37 AM Thanks Rob.;0)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 21, 2016 at 12:37 AM Great work Richard.. congrats on big win! Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2016 at 4:37 AM Tanks Upma. Hugs Rick.

Dan Cwiak January 20, 2016 at 11:58 PM Nicely done, Richard. Wool deserved win! Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2016 at 4:36 AM Ha ha, cute play on words!

C T January 20, 2016 at 11:20 PM thank you Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2016 at 4:36 AM Thanks C.T.

Poet Destroyer A January 20, 2016 at 10:05 AM haha, Richard... a sheepish grin. not a sheep at all. Hope to see this one place high... Love LINDA Richard Lamoureux January 20, 2016 at 10:20 AM Me too but you never know whether a piece will align with a judge's taste. Thanks for the positive feedback.

Kp Nunez January 20, 2016 at 9:13 AM Baaad wolf indeed! Loved this witty rhyme! Richard Lamoureux January 20, 2016 at 9:43 AM Thanks Kim, I'm not sure why my greeting to Peter jumped up here. Richard Lamoureux January 20, 2016 at 9:42 AM Thanks Peter.:0)

Kelli White January 19, 2016 at 6:09 PM Baaaaaa!baad little sheeeep. Kelli Richard Lamoureux January 19, 2016 at 7:15 PM Thanks Kelli.

Mama Bear January 19, 2016 at 5:38 PM Can't fool a sheep no matter her color. Very cute Love you Mom Richard Lamoureux January 19, 2016 at 7:15 PM Thanks mom, I love you too.

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