Azure's Not Always Pretty

the mind of the unthinking
is the color of the sky
on clear sunny days
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 9:10 AM
Everybody gets the blues now and then. Deep thought. Vince
Winter Avatar
November 16, 2008 at 6:27 AM
Wow. Truly remarkable write. Cannot tell you how many times I have felt these words. Not sure if this is haiku or senryu, as they do not have to be 5 7 5 but under 17 syllables. Either way, you put into words something I could not. Excellent. Love, Shar
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace