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With chubby little cheeks and azure eyes the baby wanders in and out of sleep, staring up with a look of feigned surprise. He can't rest no matter how hard he tries, sucking his thumb, not uttering a peep; with chubby little cheeks and azure eyes. He holds my finger like a hard-won prize; a trophy he is determined to keep, staring up with a look of feigned surprise. His need for attention soon turns to cries and breaking into tears, he starts to weep; with chubby little cheeks and azure eyes. He settles down as soon as Mom arrives; as if he just awoke from counting sheep, staring up with a look of feigned surprise. Like a devil in an angel's disguise, he twists his blankets in a tangled heap. With chubby little cheeks and azure eyes, staring up with a look of feigned surprise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/14/2018 9:49:00 PM
Adorable, Emile.
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Date: 5/15/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Line, you're a good friend and loyal supporter my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/10/2017 4:48:00 PM
The beautiful end of a great and challenging form, Emile. you have written through the eyes of a child. Great Write!!
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Date: 8/10/2017 8:20:00 PM
Thanks Ralph, your comments and support are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/10/2017 12:41:00 PM
Cute little guy! A cute poem. I really like how you reprise different lines throughout. -- Dean
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Date: 8/10/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thanks Dean, your comments and continues support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/9/2017 10:09:00 AM
Sweet, sweet!
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Date: 8/10/2017 1:33:00 PM
Thanks Anna, your comments and support are appreciated, Emile.
Date: 8/9/2017 8:35:00 AM
How cute :) Lovely write :)
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Date: 8/10/2017 1:33:00 PM
Thanks Anoucheka, your comments and support are appreciated, Emile.

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