Axon Burgess

My name is Axon Burgess
I am broken and thin
I went to fight for glory and right
but only drank more gin 

Before he died
my friend would confide 
about his sister's beauty
if her eyes did look at me 
her eyes would look right through me 

What are you doing in this town?
Who are you looking for,sir?
The girl who's face launched many a ship
I am looking for her 

What are you doing in this town?
Who are you looking for,sir?
The girl who is a cathedral of butterflies
I am looking for her 

What are you doing in this town? 
Who are you looking for,sir?
The girl who walks as gentle as a fawn 
I am looking for her
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 13, 2016 at 10:51 PM
Nice to see this one again, Marcus, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line, it' shows how deep you are with your emotions about her. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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April 4, 2015 at 8:50 PM
MARCUS, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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April 2, 2015 at 8:42 PM
Marcus, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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