Awful Sad

awful sad the lives we see,
the why is hidden, suffering thee,
is there logic so mesmerising?
in a hell world surprising?
work it out logically...?

Don

thank you Carol Brown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 7:47 PM
very well done Don,,,,,, blessings to you ;}
Williams Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 2:57 AM
Don, nothing is logical these days, as you say, 'awful sad lives' well done mate..David
Burch Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 9:00 PM
fabulouse write, Don! indeed...well done. love, deb
Culverhouse Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 8:21 PM
enjoyed your work.....
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