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he's never met anyone like her. captivating sparkle in her eyes! she leaves him a w e s t r u c k; his spirits in flight his heart won... at first sight. so in love, he can't imagine life without her... she gives it meaning. (yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 08/29/2022

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Date: 8/29/2022 2:57:00 PM
Nice one! Love your Yalto form! :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2022 3:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-) Glad you loved this one!*wink*

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