Notes About The Poem

Awestruck

he's never
     met anyone
          like her.
               captivating
                    sparkle in her eyes!

she leaves him
     a  w  e  s  t  r  u  c  k;
          his spirits
                in flight
                     his heart won...

at first sight.
     so in love, he can't
          imagine life without
              her...
                   she gives it meaning.

(yalto)

"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Date written: 08/29/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 2:57 PM
Nice one! Love your Yalto form! :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 3:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-) Glad you loved this one!*wink*
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