Kenneth R. Merrill Poet Rhyme

Awesome This, a Rising Star

The fragile mist of morning,
As the sun is breathtaking through—
I can see the daylight forming,
As the sky turns azure blue.

How awesome this, a rising star,
As a billion fade away—
The door of dawn, again ajar,
As enters a new day!

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Charmaine Chircop July 11, 2019 at 2:23 PM How beautiful the Dawning of day is..Solaced by your verse. Kenneth R. Merrill July 12, 2019 at 12:02 PM It is a spectacular thing! I recall a quote by Emily: “Not knowing when the dawn will come, I open every door.” It’s almost as though she’s equating dawn with a second coming, or death. Interesting ;-)

Caren Krutsinger July 6, 2019 at 5:26 AM A poetic write that uplifts me this morning and makes my coffee taste better. I feel like I am there, so your imagery has turned my head. Kenneth R. Merrill July 6, 2019 at 10:41 AM I thought my head-turning days were over, so thank you Caren!