David William Breidenthal Poet Senryu

Awesome Summer

I'm yearning for break
Summer's the time of my life
Awesome! School ends soon

I'm hoping for break
Summer's the best time to swim
Let's go to the beach! 

I'm waiting for school
To come to an end at last
We all need time off! 

We all yearn for an 

Awesome summer

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Andrea Dietrich April 28, 2013 at 1:09 AM I remember my school days and how I longed for that last day of school so I could start summer. ENJOY the one coming up. David William Breidenthal April 28, 2013 at 12:14 PM hahah! :P me too! Back at Elementary school and Middle School =) I always looked forward to summertime and when it arrived, I got bored after a while. Thankx! You too - have a grand one yourself!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2013 at 1:44 AM - Yes, I think all school students look forward to summer vacation - No alarm clock! Have fun in your holiday David! - A nice poem to read! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones April 24, 2013 at 6:45 PM Have an awesome summer...:-) David William Breidenthal April 24, 2013 at 6:57 PM you too!! :DD Thank you, Donna! Have fun spending time with family and suchness xD ~~~~~~~~~~~~DWB