Awe and Eeriness

Constellations shine
over the maroon cave' mouth
and eerie darkness.


Entered in Gareth James's contest,
" Familiarity Unknown"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Scripca Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 11:21 PM
Good luck in the contest. Very original Haiku. All the best, Iolanda
Guzzi Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 5:26 PM
cool imagery! Light & Love
Strand Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 8:52 AM
Best wishes in the contest Andrew.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments.
Culverhouse Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 7:04 AM
good luck in the contest, enjoyed
Kendrick Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 5:53 AM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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