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Away With the Sun

Its getting late but you already came and while you were here things never change you lay with me and tell me your words then you leave and I feel hurt. Its not you that hurts me but the sound of the door closing behind you I know for sure you'd like to stay but you never do I'm left alone missing you. These days its more frequent you leave so much that you're gone more hours than the day brings sun and I have begun to feel so numb when the door closes another night I run far away from the thoughts I have because its killing me to look at my empty hands I remember when we were on the sand you told me you loved me but you weren't my man and so I walked, feeling okay but too many months now I want you to stay Am I selfish? asking too much? You only visit me an hour after dusk and I must go on but should I stay? when you see me sometimes but its always too late.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/16/2011 11:18:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..
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Amy Kramer
Date: 9/12/2011 11:07:00 PM
thank you :)
Date: 8/16/2011 10:16:00 PM
Creative and powerful thoughts well worded, Amy
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Amy Kramer
Date: 9/12/2011 11:08:00 PM
thank you :)
Date: 8/16/2011 2:00:00 PM
I relate to the strong emotions expressed here - well-written piece - really enjoyed it.
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Amy Kramer
Date: 9/12/2011 11:09:00 PM
Thank you for the comment. Shame you can relate, but I'm sure many can. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 8/16/2011 7:04:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Amy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Amy Kramer
Date: 9/12/2011 11:16:00 PM
I also wish you great joy, peace, happiness, and most of all, love... Thank you, Carol. With love, Amy.

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