Away With the Sun

Its getting late
but you already came 
and while you were here
things never change 
you lay with me
and tell me your words
then you leave 
and I feel hurt.
Its not you that hurts me 
but the sound of the door
closing behind you 
I know for sure 
you'd like to stay 
but you never do
I'm left alone 
missing you. 
These days its more frequent 
you leave so much
that you're gone more hours 
than the day brings sun
and I have begun 
to feel so numb
when the door closes 
another night I run
far away from the thoughts I have 
because its killing me to look
at my empty hands
I remember when we were on the sand 
you told me you loved me
but you weren't my man 
and so I walked, feeling okay
but too many months 
now I want you to stay
Am I selfish?
asking too much?
You only visit me an hour
after dusk
and I must go on
but should I stay?
when you see me sometimes
but its always too late.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sweetheart Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 11:18 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..
Kramer Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 11:07 PM
thank you :)
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 10:16 PM
Creative and powerful thoughts well worded, Amy
Kramer Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 11:08 PM
thank you :)
Puddephatt Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 2:00 PM
I relate to the strong emotions expressed here - well-written piece - really enjoyed it.
Kramer Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 11:09 PM
Thank you for the comment. Shame you can relate, but I'm sure many can. Glad you enjoyed it.
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 7:04 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Amy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Kramer Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 11:16 PM
I also wish you great joy, peace, happiness, and most of all, love... Thank you, Carol. With love, Amy.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace