Away Unto Me

The light has a secret behind its force
Pictures of life know the meaning
And the flame of the fire knows how to throw you off
The moon lit with caution
And every cry you know is heard
And every tear is counted
And every different road we take will become as one in the end
Away unto me 
I love
Away unto me
I hate
Away unto me
I wish
The magic of the unicorn 
Will steal our hearts
And children will be wise until the end
My hope is like a dream
My dream is something I want to be
The words play an emotion
With every line there's a feelin
Away unto me
I love
Away unto me
I hate
Away unto me
I wish
Images reflect in space
A time I see you
Nine years ago in the past
Away unto me
Away unto you
Away unto me and you...

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Date: 4/2/2020 2:41:00 AM
Beautifully done! Thank you for all you do write on Michelle There's praise in words and words in praise James
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Michelle Barulich
Date: 4/7/2020 3:24:00 AM
Thank you James! thanks for all the encouragement and your kind comments it is appreciated!
Date: 1/30/2020 10:46:00 AM
Away unto me that your chosen words reaches the eye and hear, so beautiful to behold...away you create so delicate words and rhymes of such divine.. such a sweet wondrous write beautiful delight...(don't ever stop) Write on James :)
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Michelle Barulich
Date: 2/2/2020 4:54:00 AM
Wow thank you James for such nice compliments it sure is appreciated. You keep on writing too I love your poetry and style and creativeness too!
Date: 12/9/2019 3:04:00 AM
Michelle, this poem has a certain style of its own that made me smile, and feel happy. "every cry you know is heard And every tear is counted"- WOW! Bravo!
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Michelle Barulich
Date: 12/10/2019 2:26:00 AM
Hi Caren thank you for your kind words glad you liked my song/poem. You are very sweet!
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