Away My Boy Joy

looks like refinement
from outside boiling pot in
cool calm big fat lie

her tears tear me up
along with the depression
pukes on everyone

away my boy joy
morphed from this to that kid to man
overnight success
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 8, 2010 at 6:45 PM
kristi is name of haiku. very nice haiku with good images,
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