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Away It Goes

Away it goes to the floor it falls. Away it goes we can't fix its flaws. Away it goes down to the ground. Away it goes with barely a sound. Away it goes my memories too. Away it goes the home I once knew. Away it goes just say goodnight. Away it goes one last word goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/2/2016 2:02:00 AM
jamie boothe, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/19/2015 12:18:00 AM
Jamie, I like this very much SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2009 6:41:00 PM
love it! it's beautiful & moving. -Ell
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Date: 5/4/2009 9:26:00 PM
Nicely written! "Away it goes"- jeremiah
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