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July 14, 2023

Syllable count checked at HMS

Rhyme as per Rhymezone.com

Contest : Away In A Manger Contest Re Run

Sponsored by : Jan Allison

Away in a way dark No one in my sight Lone walk seems unending In the moonless night I’ve traveled a long way Far away from you Wish you’re now beside me Darkness glues us two I’ll explore you anew The way I had done First time in the dark park You’ll feel the rerun

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Date: 8/1/2023 6:33:00 PM
Nicely done, Subimal! Congrats on your top win! Blessings, Kim M
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/2/2023 10:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim.
Date: 7/31/2023 8:27:00 AM
I love to go out walking at night time. Many congrats on your top placement and thanks for taking time to enter the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/2/2023 10:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan for the placement and for your encouraging comments.

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