Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Rhyme

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July 14, 2023

Syllable count checked at HMS

Rhyme as per Rhymezone.com

Contest : Away In A Manger Contest Re Run

Sponsored by : Jan Allison

Away In a Way Dark

Away in a way dark
No one in my sight
Lone walk seems unending
In the moonless night

I’ve traveled a long way
Far away from you
Wish you’re now beside me
Darkness glues us two

I’ll explore you anew
The way I had done
First time in the dark park
You’ll feel the rerun

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Kim Merryman August 1, 2023 at 6:33 PM Nicely done, Subimal! Congrats on your top win! Blessings, Kim M Subimal Sinha-Roy August 2, 2023 at 10:02 PM Thank you so much, Kim.

Jan Allison July 31, 2023 at 8:27 AM I love to go out walking at night time. Many congrats on your top placement and thanks for taking time to enter the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Subimal Sinha-Roy August 2, 2023 at 10:01 PM Thank you so much, Jan for the placement and for your encouraging comments.