July 14, 2023
Syllable count checked at HMS
Rhyme as per Rhymezone.com
Contest : Away In A Manger Contest Re Run
Sponsored by : Jan Allison
Away in a way dark No one in my sight Lone walk seems unending In the moonless night I’ve traveled a long way Far away from you Wish you’re now beside me Darkness glues us two I’ll explore you anew The way I had done First time in the dark park You’ll feel the rerun
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