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Away In a Rv

Away in an RV No roadmap to see, A new adventure, Awaits you and me. A fancy home on wheels, Drinks and snacks packed, Firewood and marshmallows, On the road at last. National parks to explore Campfire stories told Getting together, Memories unfold. A bucket list voyage, Coast to coast we go, Not a care in the world, Where we stop, nobody knows.

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Date: 8/1/2023 6:43:00 PM
Sounds like a wonderful trip! Congrats on your win, Catherine! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/31/2023 8:37:00 AM
I always dream of doing a road trip in the USA ne day! Your poem was very good but unfortunately i had to dock points as the syllable count wasn't consistent and packed and last don't rhyme. Many congrats on your placement and thanks for taking time to enter the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/17/2023 8:23:00 PM
Sounds like the 'ultimate' road trip! Sign me up! ~ Gershon
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Rev. Catherine Cassell
Date: 7/18/2023 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Gershon, I just need pennies from heaven to fund the trip.
Date: 7/13/2023 12:15:00 PM
Great penning with nice expression and nice imagery Catherine, blessings always,Gordon
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Rev. Catherine Cassell
Date: 7/13/2023 12:48:00 PM
Thank you Gordon, this one was fun to write
Date: 7/12/2023 8:27:00 AM
Ahhh!! Creative lines penned about a nice road trip. I hope the trip will be the best with lots of good adventures. Sara
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Rev. Catherine Cassell
Date: 7/12/2023 1:01:00 PM
Thank you Sara, nothing like marking it off your bucket kist. Blessings

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