Laura Leiser Poet Rhyme

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Away I Sail

Away I sail, by the light of dawning day
                    Through tides and swells where the dolphins play
                               To distant shores, I venture
                                   With awestruck wonder
                                             In silence 
                                                SAIL 
                                          This moment    
                                         I see the glory
                               Wild seagulls, high and soaring
                            Come sail away, o're the lofty seas
                   In search of safe harbors, where souls are set free.





     




Written on 2/9/2015

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Jc Hawkens April 18, 2020 at 6:56 AM This was a beautiful daydream in my morning. If it weren't for the scent of my coffee, I could have sworn I was still dreaming.

David William Breidenthal April 13, 2020 at 3:10 PM Very adventurous and remarkable poem!

Mahtab Bangalee April 13, 2020 at 12:58 AM wow fantastic poem and its shape like the wings of skylark/// lovely penning

Sam Kauffman April 12, 2020 at 2:34 PM Laura, lovely nonet! Congratulations on having a featured poem.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 23, 2015 at 3:02 AM Congrats on ur wonderful win with this superb write Laura! Laura Leiser October 23, 2015 at 1:12 PM Thank you, Dr. Upma :)

Balveen Cheema October 22, 2015 at 9:45 PM Laura, i just loved yor rhyme! Ongrats on your win! Laura Leiser October 23, 2015 at 1:12 PM Thank you, Balveen :)

Debbie Guzzi October 22, 2015 at 8:22 PM Congrad's on your win! Light & Love Laura Leiser October 23, 2015 at 1:12 PM Thank you, Debbie :)

C T October 22, 2015 at 6:50 PM Thank you Laura Leiser October 22, 2015 at 7:54 PM Thank YOU, Chase, for placing me in your wonderful contest! I love the sea and I'm glad you thought my poem reflected that :)

Pendleton Arkwright September 1, 2015 at 11:57 AM Makes me think of taking a grey ship to Valinor. I like this! Good work! Laura Leiser September 2, 2015 at 12:50 PM Wow, I wrote this awhile ago! Thanks for finding it and liking this, Pendleton! :)

Arlene Smith February 10, 2015 at 3:59 PM Laura, this is stunning, dear friend.. I love poems about the sea!.. Hugs.. Arlene Laura Leiser February 10, 2015 at 4:05 PM Thank you so much, Arlene! It was an interesting format since I was trying to write it for the rules of Andrea's Help Me Name It poetry contest. We do own a sailboat, so I'm grateful I get to go sailing often :)