Away

Azure shore lines breaking into being. Sun rises on a new vista; golden red on blue
shimmerings. Coral strategies negotiate Island doorways into paradise found. Cove sought
for mooring as anchors seek bottom line. Dory maneuvers tax coffee breakfast basket. Warm
waves shift sands beneath bare toes. Breath ocean breeze.


This was written in response to a request for poems that paint a picture in exactly 50
words. A lot harder than it seems!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Winter Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 9:52 AM
Wow. You did an amazing job. Imagery is magnificent! Well done! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 11:59 AM
Krow I bet it's not and you certainly did an amazing job with it - God Bless, MJ
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