Michael J. Falotico Poet Quintain (English)

Awaking With Smiles

"Make me Swoon" contest



                                     Rose petals of silk outline your sleep.
                                   Sunlight rides over your body with ease.
                                   Moments like this are held close to keep.
                             Like touching a magical rainbow even for a tease.
                                   As I watch her dream, I love all she sees

                                 To see your eyes open and a calm with a grin.
                              Your smile tells me all ,without a word being said.
                         We talk with our eyes as butterfly kisses touch your chin.
                           A buffet of love and a desert of smiles now fill our bed.
                                Our hunger is met with passion, as desire is fed.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 28, 2011 at 1:14 PM Hello luv.. wanted to share something with u Michael.. was watching the Wendy Williams show and there was a girl on ..some song writer ..a Kara Guardi I think her last name and she has written hits for Christina Aquilera and Aerosmith... she is hosting a new TV show starting end of May called Platinum Song I believe ... for songwriters to submit their work for a possible contract.. I thought of u and me...luv.. so keep it in mind ..Jersey Girl looking out for her W.K......forever ..luv..

Wilma Neels March 12, 2011 at 2:19 PM A real stunner once again Michael, would be a joy to wake up like this every morning.. Good luck for Francine's contest ;) love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 12, 2011 at 5:57 AM Ok my husband needs to read this right now Michael.. such a lovely expression of luv u feel for your loving wife and partner for life..luv.. Ron is committing these words to memory .. so he will enjo waking up every day with these words in mind luv.. awesome visuals ... it is supposed to be 59 and sunny but so far it is just cold luv... Jersey Girl luvs this one for sure .. always and forever ..luv..

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2011 at 10:32 PM She is sure to love this one, Michael!! YOu did a great job with the form and produced fine romance!

Sara Kendrick March 11, 2011 at 3:51 PM Enjoyed reading this romantic work this eve..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire March 11, 2011 at 2:52 PM It just sounded like one of his poems, Michael. I will make the correction. Thanks for pointing this out. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire March 11, 2011 at 2:26 PM The rose petals of silk, butterfly kisses and a buffet of love -- these words certainly leave me swooning. This is sure to get a high place in Francine's contest. I hung on every line, sighing. Please send some butterfly kisses my way. The bees are out already, but no butterflies yet. Waiting... Best wishes in the contest, Michael, and thank you for your friendship. Love, Carolyn

Sharon Ruebel March 11, 2011 at 2:19 PM Ahhh Michael, Well it works for me "Swooning" Smiles, this is beautiful Michael, a sure winner for the contest I am sure. Have a wonderful weekend As Always, Shar