Awakens with a Whisper

The house whispers
as I awaken
and a dream plays.
My loft breathes as I get up.
The block on the hill
still after the night’s
storm, and a story
plays in my head
remnants of a love
I once had. The cat
rumbling on my chest.
shares the moment.

…
Tires sing as I drive
along the river
as it takes in reflections
of sun. I’ve viewed
the scene many times.
I’m seeing it again.
Public Radio plays
a feature on psychology
and the triumphs and trials
of life, and I cry out
This is me. This is me.

‘’’
In a diner, dishes clink
and patrons laugh
while elderly cajole
their granddaughters
voices filled with promise
about the lives that lie
ahead.

…
I walk away
from old conversations
the pain felt
after someone left for good
and unanswered questions.

…
I stay true
to one thousand voices
in my head.
A new poem I seek.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Greenhough Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 6:25 PM
Your days seem to be filled with stimulating events. I enjoyed the vignette in one day.
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 9:21 PM
'one thousand voices in my head' -- completely resonant, Mike. ~ Overwhelmed, as usual
Godwin Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 12:00 PM
Punched me in the heart. In the poem, person is in a dinner, but put me in Home Depot staring (I think obviously) at couples talking), & so lonely passing same sights with different emotion, I could go on but don't want to visit this pain overly long. A wonderful poem that I hope is not your current situation. If it is, I know all things are working together for your highest good and you will be pulled out, just not by Thursday as we humans would prefer. Again, GREAT POEM/FEEL
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