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Awakenings

In a beautiful green valley Where wild flowers grow Comes the first blanketing of winter's snow The clouds up above float luxuriously by As I lay and stare at the wonderous sky I can hear the wind whisper thru the trees And smell the crisp air in the gentle breeze I can not touch or feel The feeling is slightly surreal I cast my eyes down To see what lays ahead It is then that I realize that I am dead My body is draped in a long black dress My skin is absolutely colourless It's a frightening feeling I must confess I can hear the priest saying a few kind words And in the background the beautiful harmony of birds Sniffles and sobs reach my ears I guess I didn't make it to my golden years My eyes survey the group gathered round A tear in the eye of each could be found It is then that I see my only boy And my love for him shines with so much joy Suddenly a sadness fills me where once I was glad As I realize I will never again kiss that sweet lad He's saying goodbye And I must too I just don't know if I have the strength to do A soft voice calls to me from above "Come home my child", it says with love "Come home and be free, Come and live with me" I yearn to drift into that heavenly grace But I can't bear the look on my child's lonely face I drift just a little above And turn to look back with sadness and love Be good my son, be happy and carefree Don't cry or remain sad, think of me and be glad I will be waiting for you at heaven's gate There I will sit and patiently wait And when your work here is done I will welcome you home Then you and I will never be alone I know that he can't hear the words in my head For I know I am really and truly dead A gentle hand touches my arm I know that it is time to go And so I walk toward the heavenly glow Leaving no footprints in the brand new snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 6/13/2010 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:49:00 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer. Love, Leke!
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Date: 6/9/2010 11:45:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/7/2010 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Bernadette. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 8:59:00 PM
yea a very interesting poem, and many Congratulations on having your poem featured this week, enjoyed your wonderful poem,..p..d
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Date: 6/6/2010 12:53:00 PM
Powerful poem. Such an interesting perspective to convey the love between parent and child. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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