Carrie Richards Poet Cinquain

Awakening -- Visual 7

Washed clean
yesterday's sun
tiptoes across morning
rinsed by last night's dream of darkness
breaks new



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Andrea's Contest: Adelaide Crapsey's Poems
1/12/15 ........  Visual # 7

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Skat A February 1, 2015 at 2:33 PM CARRIE, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 28, 2015 at 10:17 AM One of my favorites on the winner's list...congrats on your win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Abdul Malik Mandani January 26, 2015 at 2:44 PM There's so much going on in each line. I like this the most. Pretty nice write.

Sara Kendrick January 26, 2015 at 12:36 PM !!! : > )...Way to go..Sara

Bl Devnath January 26, 2015 at 7:52 AM Wonderful poem read from you and wishing you congratulation on your superb win. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl

Arlene Smith January 25, 2015 at 7:18 PM Congrats on a great win with this stunning piece, dear Carrie!! Hugs.. Arlene

Greg Hoffman January 25, 2015 at 6:40 PM Carrie,congrats on your win in the contest.

David Mohn January 25, 2015 at 4:07 PM What a stunner!...big congrats

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2015 at 3:32 PM Wow, yours is so beautiful. I almost put it at first place!! Probably should have. haha. For a tie or something. anyway, you did an awesome job. Congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux January 25, 2015 at 3:20 PM Well done Carrie!

Sandra Haight January 25, 2015 at 3:12 PM Beautiful, Carrie. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus January 25, 2015 at 2:38 PM Congratulations on another fine win, Carrie! Morning breaks with beauty. #7 // paul

Rob Carmack January 25, 2015 at 2:16 PM Congrats Carrie on your placement with this fine poem.

Jan Allison January 25, 2015 at 1:37 PM Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 15, 2015 at 12:44 PM Yea coup de maître>>Love:::::rajat

Deb Wilson January 13, 2015 at 1:58 AM so nice to read your beautiful poetry again as I haven't been here for awhile ...I really liked it Carrie! Hugs, Deb

Jan Allison January 13, 2015 at 1:44 AM so beautiful Carrie - good luck:-) Hugs Jan xx

Francine Roberts January 12, 2015 at 7:54 PM lovely Carrie, best of luck in the contest

Ty Townsend January 12, 2015 at 6:44 PM What a peaceful way to bring in a new day! A very lovely poem!