Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

Awakening Love - Hiku 8

Written: May 24, 2025, For contest by Brian Strand

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F
  i
    n
      g
        e                                         \|/ \|/     
          r   t i p s    of      d*a*w*n    ***     

                               r 
                             e
                           d
     \|/\|/            n
     * * *          e
m o r n i n g    t   ~     ~   s  o  f  t
                       o 
                          u
                              c
                                  h       


a w
a k
e n
i  n
 g      l o v e   sw eet  a
                                  c
                                    h
                                     e  ~~~

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Paige Hind May 27, 2025 at 2:31 PM Sweet-

Kim Rodrigues May 26, 2025 at 12:34 PM Creative! Congrats!

Paula Goldsmith May 25, 2025 at 10:13 AM What a fun read and creative write. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away.........

Anne-Lise Andresen May 25, 2025 at 7:14 AM - Really well done and lovely written, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Ink Empress May 25, 2025 at 7:11 AM I love how youv personified elements of nature and delivered such an artistic write on awakening and dawn, how beautiful is the way your lines are arranged too! I especially love " fingertips of dawn " and "morning soft touch and the second one with love and the aching emotions that flow really left me feeling so much dr sotto! Best wishes for the contest! I suppose i should do my hiku too soon! Sending you light always

Victor Buhagiar May 25, 2025 at 6:51 AM Sweet ache: I must think on that but not at dawn.

Ghairo Daniels May 24, 2025 at 7:34 PM Very creative use of line & devices. I’m still learning this form. Initially I thought haiku could only be three lines, 17 syllables. I’ve noticed this rule no longer applies. ThkU, Sotto.