Awakening

Drifting, misappropriated,
my lips spoke trivialities,
my hapless heart was inarticulate.

Fearfully I fumbled through 
each day, frittering opportunities, 
fervently hoping they wouldn't pick me.

A wraith within a wraith, I flittered by 
commitment like a man without a plan; 
I only knew the pleasures of avoidance, 

'til I was pushed into the present by
a crushing ultimatum, compelling me 
to find my way alone, now I greet 
each morning with a smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Yuhas Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 12:42 PM
You believe in yourself Keith, very nice write.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Thanks Pete... I am most grateful. Keith
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